Poem fragments

As we are passing from the poetry section to the short story section of my creative writing class, I feel I need to post some poem fragments that were written this past week. These are thus far unrevised and in their rawest form. Any of my class mates feel free to email me on Blackboard if you have any criticism +/-

#1
At the end of mankind's genesis
lies nature
unmolested.

#2
I've never been abandoned
Never left behind
Yet I fear it
I fear abandonment like it's familiar
My parents are still together
My marriage? Sound.
Why does it haunt me?

#3
The day is over
my once fond friend
The sun is setting
and we near our end

Overall I have to say I am loving this class and feel like I may want to continue on in the future with additional creative writing classes and personal experiments. Sadly I have not been able to take the time to write the sonnet that Jake (our instructor) has asked us to write. I am finding the burdens of my life to be heavy most times. With term paper due dates lurking but days away my time is most minimized.